just saw all the entries

thought i'd critique each entry individually.
oh..and yea...pls read all the comments below, esp if it on your entry, just in case your post is incomplete....
QUOTE (your_mother @ Oct 2 2009, 03:22 PM)

this is funny yet artistic all at once

no comments on this one. it's your husband, after all...you can do what u please

QUOTE (bsiomar @ Oct 2 2009, 09:20 PM)

the thought behind this one is not too clear. it could have been better, i am afraid

plus, the "nice and easy" is blurry, never a good sign for a wallpaper
QUOTE (galmed @ Oct 2 2009, 10:14 PM)

i love the concept on this one. and the effect on your_father's head are pretty well done. it almost seems like a real ad.
from what u have posted, it seems that u have used nothing other than the box of fries to start with? if the rest of the image is entirely done by yourself, respect from me, man
and the story titles are just too hilarious

this is one magazine i'd definitely love to read

amazing work
QUOTE (ACAPELLA @ Oct 3 2009, 01:44 PM)

MY FINAL ENTRY...
MY LINK...http://gallery.mobile9.com/f/963692/ORIGINAL...

great concept. a little funny as well. the sudden change in image means that it isn't going to be too useful as a mobile wallpaper, since people like the background to remain either steady or slowly changing. but nice work nonetheless.
QUOTE (krakit @ Oct 3 2009, 02:57 PM)

the father comes across as weird rather than scary. i assume scary is how you wanted it to be?! the font could have been better as well.
QUOTE (hinarashi @ Oct 3 2009, 05:58 PM)

i would like to see the rest of the originals. the newspaper and anything else u might have used. please post them all.
QUOTE (funfree @ Oct 3 2009, 06:16 PM)

the first original is copyrighted by fotosearch

how did u obtain that image? don't tell me you paid for it!?
the work you have put in is pretty evident. it might not be THE best entry, but it is efinitely among one of the best first entries in WPC. welcome to WPC