@ mohib_rameen - That looks much better!
Look at the bottom left corner, where the big rock meets the small ones. That can be improved. Also the woman in the sky doesn't look too good, try to find something more colourful!

Can we see the originals? Then I'll be able to say more!

Remember, the topic is "FANTASY" so try to make something colourful, cheerful! I'm sure you've got the skills!

Here's mine, I followed AXR's and your_mother's advice:

Not so sure about the bubbles though... Although without them i think its too boring.