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Longhairsteff
QUOTE (BadBoyThemer @ Feb 4 2009, 04:42 PM) *
QUOTE (Longhairsteff @ Feb 5 2009, 12:37 AM) *
Good luck avereyone...awsome themers here! 10.gif

This i my project so far
Tell me what you think?


shame the images are soooo small, very hard to really see your detials etc, but yes colors are good, theme looks nice, the analouge clock is a good match for the wallpaper imo, well done smile.gif


Thanks! Badboy

Is there a another way to upload a preview?
boxieblue
yes. go to
www.imageshack.us
upload the preview there....u will get a "hotlink for forums" copy and paste it here wink.gif
Gault
alright. heres my first screen.




remember everyone : this is my first time creating a sony ericsson theme so all advices are welcome and most appreciated.

and look. rjDsouza is here. hey buddy. i've seen some of your works and i think they are awesome.
boxieblue
nice start. i think that the time is not clearly readable due to the bright yellow.....
Gault
thats the same thing that i thought. i think i will burn the yellow. so that green is visible...

thanks for this piece of ADvIcE
boxieblue
wink.gif

i thought maybe u cud tell me which of my entries shud be in the final thread unsure.gif coz now i have two different versions......
mohammed_intekhab
@bbt:-very nice clean and functional theme
@dasiy:-good image for theme
@NVDS1:-you have also good image to theme
@Boxie:-clean and functional
@gault:-very goo abstrac image
@longhair:-i cant see you image in detail pw is too small
@rhtz:-very professional choice of image very tough to theme
@rjdsouza:-Welcome back clap.gif
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my entry
First screen
how is that
boxieblue
wallbash.gif which one? the first one or the second one???

as for your work, nice start...the softkey's a little too bright for my taste smile.gif


boxieblue
ok since so many guys missed this....i have two entries to choose from laugh.gif help me decide.....

QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 4 2009, 04:25 PM) *
wow guys! your work is so AWESOME! ohmy.gif i am having second thoughts about entering now sad.gif

anywayz, here's a preview



how many of u think my theme needs more contrast??? smile.gif



QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 4 2009, 09:43 PM) *
@BBT: with the white SK, the blue border looks a lot classier, as u will see in a few moments wink.gif

@ALL: ok...it took me a good amount of time to redesign everything. now u guys have to ell me which one should be my final entry smile.gif


Longhairsteff
QUOTE (BadBoyThemer @ Feb 4 2009, 04:42 PM) *
QUOTE (Longhairsteff @ Feb 5 2009, 12:37 AM) *
Good luck avereyone...awsome themers here! 10.gif

This i my project so far
Tell me what you think?


shame the images are soooo small, very hard to really see your detials etc, but yes colors are good, theme looks nice, the analouge clock is a good match for the wallpaper imo, well done smile.gif


Another try then..hopefully you don't need glasses now smile.gif

Bishop_Bacon
QUOTE (mohammed_intekhab @ Feb 4 2009, 07:15 PM) *
my entry
First screen
how is that


Hi Mohammed byebye.gif . That's one nice sketch, I'd only make the softkey more symmetric, e.g. take the left half of it and mirror it.

QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 4 2009, 07:22 PM) *
ok since so many guys missed this....i have two entries to choose from laugh.gif help me decide.....


Hmmm, #1 imho has the nicer tab solution wheras in #2 the white highlights look better. Perhaps try #1 together with the white highlights of #2? In general, your highlights will look more elegant if you make them a few pixels smaller in height, so they aren't overlapped by the unselected text, like it's e.g. the case in the third screen ("Auto Time Zone" highlight) or the sixth screen ("Voice message" highlight). I'm sure, there's one experienced SE themer around who can give you advice about the exact pixel measure.
rjdsouza
QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 5 2009, 02:22 AM) *
ok since so many guys missed this....i have two entries to choose from laugh.gif help me decide.....

QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 4 2009, 09:43 PM) *
@BBT: with the white SK, the blue border looks a lot classier, as u will see in a few moments wink.gif

@ALL: ok...it took me a good amount of time to redesign everything. now u guys have to ell me which one should be my final entry smile.gif





go with the white... but maybe you might wanna change the desktop highlight to match the rest of them smile.gif


btw. Bishop's right about the highlights. I usually knock off 3 to 5 pixels from the top & bottom of highlights. Then save the file with transparent background
boxieblue
QUOTE (Bishop_Bacon @ Feb 4 2009, 11:53 PM) *
QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 4 2009, 07:22 PM) *
ok since so many guys missed this....i have two entries to choose from laugh.gif help me decide.....


Hmmm, #1 imho has the nicer tab solution wheras in #2 the white highlights look better. Perhaps try #1 together with the white highlights of #2? In general, your highlights will look more elegant if you make them a few pixels smaller in height, so they aren't overlapped by the unselected text, like it's e.g. the case in the third screen ("Auto Time Zone" highlight) or the sixth screen ("Voice message" highlight). I'm sure, there's one experienced SE themer around who can give you advice about the exact pixel measure.

ohhh yeah! thanks i used to do this in my older themes but after such a long break i forgot about it smile.gif thanks....

but i don't understand what u mean by tab solution unsure.gif
#1 has nicer Tab solution?
try #1 with highlights of #2????? blink.gif
rjdsouza
@ davis
QUOTE (davis-art @ Feb 5 2009, 01:09 AM) *
Gee, Rod, glad to see you, my friend! wow.gif
See some nice entries here. I'm doomed to be in haha.gif byebye.gif

Thanks. Good to be back smile.gif

@ Gault
QUOTE (Gault @ Feb 5 2009, 01:45 AM) *
alright. heres my first screen.




remember everyone : this is my first time creating a sony ericsson theme so all advices are welcome and most appreciated.

and look. rjDsouza is here. hey buddy. i've seen some of your works and i think they are awesome.

Looking quite promising for 1st time SE themer. Besides readability issue, how about applying the style used in the status to the menu bar? tongue.gif

@ mohammed_intekhab
QUOTE (mohammed_intekhab @ Feb 5 2009, 02:15 AM) *
...@rjdsouza:-Welcome back clap.gif
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my entry
First screen
how is that

Thanks - good to be back.... I hope I remember what to do.
I like your first screen. Might want to think about changing the checked background to something that compliments or doesn't distract from the curvy lines smile.gif

daisy06
@ Boxie, i think i may be out voted but i prefer the first!!!

@ BBT thanks for comment, cant believe you finished urs already, looks amazing!

@ cuteheart, LOVE the clock! Really good job!!!

@ Mohammed nice work, cant wait to see end result!!!

@everyone else.....awesome job so far.....isnt this FUN!!!!!!! love it!
jasnasto
@Rod
Good to know you're back with your great work and useful and helpful comments... clap.gif

@all
I really enjoy seeing your previews and reading your posts... that's the spirit of TMC I like... grouphug.gif
ArthurWill
QUOTE (Longhairsteff @ Feb 5 2009, 02:24 AM) *
Another try then..hopefully you don't need glasses now smile.gif


Hello Longhair! byebye.gif So glad to see you giving the competition a try. Your theme is looking good so far and I agree with BBT that the clock fits the theme well. thumbsup.gif The preview is now bigger and yeah save me from needing my good old glasses. However, would you be try to post a full, unresized screenshot? Like THIS? It helps us to see the full detail of the theme.
manitaaan
welcome back rjdsouza clap.gif
cute_heart
Here is my full screen short , hope everyone like it ,,,,,,,,,, i uploaded on my profile ,,,,,




i just edit all my themes screen , hope everyone like it ,,,,,,,,,,
Special_Hugs




Wow Imran
Fantastic work. And I Love the clock
Keep up the excellent work
Please can you make the same for Nokia 6300
Thanks

10.gif
natasha-nate
QUOTE (cute_heart @ Feb 4 2009, 08:21 AM) *
hello everyone i made this clock please tell me how is it ? thanks everyone


This is very beautiful my dear friend.........
Very, very nice clap.gif notworthy.gif
cute_heart
QUOTE (Special_Hugs @ Feb 5 2009, 02:14 AM) *



Wow Imran
Fantastic work. And I Love the clock
Keep up the excellent work
Please can you make the same for Nokia 6300
Thanks

10.gif



i will try to make themes for you special_hugs ,
cute_heart
QUOTE (daisy06 @ Feb 4 2009, 10:47 PM) *
@ Boxie, i think i may be out voted but i prefer the first!!!

@ BBT thanks for comment, cant believe you finished urs already, looks amazing!

@ cuteheart, LOVE the clock! Really good job!!!

@ Mohammed nice work, cant wait to see end result!!!

@everyone else.....awesome job so far.....isnt this FUN!!!!!!! love it!


'deisy06'

thank you friend you like it
daisy06
beautiful job cute heart, knew you'd make it something wonderful!
10.gif
migoy_ghost
this is fun. i'll make one tonight 10.gif
daisy06
man.....how come you can all make awesome themes overnight, and it takes me like the WHOLE 2 weeks, and they still dont look half as good as yours
.........its not fair!!!!

wallbash.gif
rhtz
@ NVDVS :: 10.gif wow.gif
@ Mohammed :: nyc work man.. ..can't wait to see the rest of the screens wow.gif
@ Daisy :: i'm going thru the same problem here sad.gif .. ..


EDIT :: I have no clue what I'll do with the highlyt bars wallbash.gif
Lionet
I think I'll go with this pic:


Original is here
rjdsouza
@ cute_heart
QUOTE (cute_heart @ Feb 5 2009, 09:36 AM) *
Here is my full screen short , hope everyone like it ,,,,,,,,,, i upload on my profile ,,,,,





I do like the concept & how you've nicely blended the grey with a bit of red thumbsup.gif

But I also see some areas that could be tweeked to make it a great theme... I hope you don't mind surrender.gif
1. There's a smudge in your background image (bottom right) that's appearing in all areas that you used this background.
2. Standby screen - details are what sets apart good & great themes. But only if done. The "WED 4, 2009" is blocked by the time-date display. Also, I see a white line along the right side of the background image
3. Desktop highlight & active tab - same vertical white line running down the right side. But it looks fine in the other highlight bars
4. Menu bar - the vertical white dividers looks a bit out of place. Try grey
5. Valentine (the heart shape) - if you need to re-size it, keep it proportioned. Also, it's doesn't need to be centered all the time. For that matter, it doesn't have to be part of the background.
6. Font colours - they are readable but try to be consistent by using colour tones that complement the overall colour scheme (i.e. try light grey or shades of grey
7. Scroll bar - light blue does not complement the scheme because of the red heart (I feel)

Overall, your theme is titled "black.clock". You should try to apply elements of your clock (not the whole clock) on some of the other screens... would tie the whole theme together better

smile.gif
rjdsouza
@ daisy
QUOTE (daisy06 @ Feb 5 2009, 11:34 AM) *
man.....how come you can all make awesome themes overnight, and it takes me like the WHOLE 2 weeks, and they still dont look half as good as yours
.........its not fair!!!!

wallbash.gif


It's not how fast you can churn out a theme, but how satisfied you are with your creation wink.gif
....patience, patience, patience, inspiration, inspiration, inspiration, patience, patience, patience, practice, practice, practice, patience, patience, patience weightlift.gifsmile.gif

vswindtalker
QUOTE (rjdsouza @ Feb 5 2009, 08:13 AM) *
@ cute_heart
QUOTE (cute_heart @ Feb 5 2009, 09:36 AM) *
Here is my full screen short , hope everyone like it ,,,,,,,,,, i upload on my profile ,,,,,





I do like the concept & how you've nicely blended the grey with a bit of red thumbsup.gif

But I also see some areas that could be tweeked to make it a great theme... I hope you don't mind surrender.gif
1. There's a smudge in your background image (bottom right) that's appearing in all areas that you used this background.
2. Standby screen - details are what sets apart good & great themes. But only if done. The "WED 4, 2009" is blocked by the time-date display. Also, I see a white line along the right side of the background image
3. Desktop highlight & active tab - same vertical white line running down the right side. But it looks fine in the other highlight bars
4. Menu bar - the vertical white dividers looks a bit out of place. Try grey
5. Valentine (the heart shape) - if you need to re-size it, keep it proportioned. Also, it's doesn't need to be centered all the time. For that matter, it doesn't have to be part of the background.
6. Font colours - they are readable but try to be consistent by using colour tones that complement the overall colour scheme (i.e. try light grey or shades of grey
7. Scroll bar - light blue does not complement the scheme because of the red heart (I feel)

Overall, your theme is titled "black.clock". You should try to apply elements of your clock (not the whole clock) on some of the other screens... would tie the whole theme together better

smile.gif






@cute heart - my friend, don't let some good words to fake you. Honestly, with this theme you got no chance in TMC. But the idea is very good, and rjd offered you a perfect landmarks list to make your theme a candidate to be on the podium.
What I can say is dont stretch the objects; meaning keep the objects on its proportioned size, and use more transparency. byebye.gif
boxieblue
@cute_heart: rjd gave you some pretty good advice.....windtalker might sound pretty harsh, but i think he is right smile.gif
what i observed is that u have used the SAME image for everything...the background, the highlight bars, the title bars....the strecthed out heart looks very bad surrender.gif and in some cases (see bottom left) it is very pixellated sad.gif and i can't understand what that smudge at the bottom right of the images is...

sorry mate....i know this sounds rough laugh.gif but u gotta take care of these issues wink.gif

one suggestion....for the highlight bars, instead of keeping a stretched out heart, keep a tiny heart on the extreme right of the bar, and keep the rest of it blank wink.gif


@windtalker: how about your honest opinion on MY theme as well? laugh.gif where do i stand?
@ALL: i am still confused about my entry surrender.gif
@Bishop: what does tab solution mean?????
@lionet: pretty good(and tough) choice! cant wait to see wat u do with it! wow.gif i think u are gonna have a hard time making sure the background doesn't interfere with the text unsure.gif but then again, you are a LOT more experienced than me smile.gif
ArthurWill
QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 5 2009, 03:29 PM) *
@lionet: pretty good(and tough) choice! ...

That's exactly who Lionet is ... never selecting ideal wallpaper but often came out with a smashing theme. Did you remember? This is the guy who wanted to do a Toyota theme when there are tonnes of cool cars like Ferrari, Aston Martin etc. tongue.gif
daisy06
QUOTE (rjdsouza @ Feb 5 2009, 03:23 PM) *
@ daisy
QUOTE (daisy06 @ Feb 5 2009, 11:34 AM) *
man.....how come you can all make awesome themes overnight, and it takes me like the WHOLE 2 weeks, and they still dont look half as good as yours
.........its not fair!!!!

wallbash.gif


It's not how fast you can churn out a theme, but how satisfied you are with your creation wink.gif
....patience, patience, patience, inspiration, inspiration, inspiration, patience, patience, patience, practice, practice, practice, patience, patience, patience weightlift.gifsmile.gif




LOL!!!! i know i know! it just seems that no matter how long I put into my theme it just doesnt seem anywhere near the standard that
ive come across in the TMC's ! its like you say, practice practice practice!!!!
daisy06
QUOTE (Lionet @ Feb 5 2009, 03:10 PM) *
I think I'll go with this pic:


Original is here



OHHHHH....cant wait to see it completed!
boxieblue
@AW: yeah i guess so! no wonder he commands so much respect from the other themers laugh.gif i would never be able to use a background like that.......

@daisy: i like ur theme unsure.gif but yeah...it's all about practise
Lionet
QUOTE (ArthurWill) *
That's exactly who Lionet is ... never selecting ideal wallpaper but often came out with a smashing theme. Did you remember? This is the guy who wanted to do a Toyota theme when there are tonnes of cool cars like Ferrari, Aston Martin etc. tongue.gif

ROFL! I never liked sport cars smile.gif Thank you for you kind words notworthy.gif

QUOTE (boxieblue) *
... he commands so much respect from the other themers ...

really? surrender.gif

QUOTE (boxieblue) *
i think u are gonna have a hard time making sure the background doesn't interfere with the text

Hey, boxie, that's easy enough... If you'll add one layer above your picture, paint it into one neutral color, and add some transparency to it, than you'll get a pretty good background for your text smile.gif please try smile.gif
boxieblue
laugh.gif u could have tried a Rolls Royce theme then tongue.gif
jodhpur_raj
i m in



vswindtalker
QUOTE (boxieblue @ Feb 5 2009, 09:29 AM) *
@windtalker: how about your honest opinion on MY theme as well? laugh.gif where do i stand?


You choose a good wallpaper, but...........what I think you have to reserve some more time on your theme. ie. you organized the big highlight pretty well (meaning the height of it, and how the text suited) but the small highlight is on its default height. Cut 2 pixels from up and another from down and it will show up better, on a transparent background ofcourse.
I recommend you to take a look at the old winning themes in TMC. Try to get some inspiration from there, ofcourse you can not be perfect from the first day, but inorder to make some improvement you have to try a bit harder. If I were you I would use blue highlights with this theme and add some dark blue-black gradient. Contrasting border is also not suited in my opinion on the highs. And also the text colors are very important what I think. Try to choose the suitable contrasting text colors since you keep the balance and harmony.
If I were you I would go and see some of Jasnasto's and PatrickLippe's themes. grouphug.gif byebye.gif
boxieblue
hmmm...that was very detailed. thanks smile.gif

so u mean i should use blue highlights? did u see my first version of this? the one in which i have used Blue highlights??? maybe that is what u meant? smile.gif

i will make the highlight bars smaller of course, but tell me shud i do it with the blue one or the white one.....

and what text color would you recommend? i though white looks best on this theme smile.gif

and now while i wait for your reply i am off to Jasnasto's and PatrickLippe's homesites byebye.gif
cute_heart
QUOTE (vswindtalker @ Feb 5 2009, 06:42 AM) *
QUOTE (rjdsouza @ Feb 5 2009, 08:13 AM) *
@ cute_heart
QUOTE (cute_heart @ Feb 5 2009, 09:36 AM) *
Here is my full screen short , hope everyone like it ,,,,,,,,,, i upload on my profile ,,,,,





I do like the concept & how you've nicely blended the grey with a bit of red thumbsup.gif

But I also see some areas that could be tweeked to make it a great theme... I hope you don't mind surrender.gif
1. There's a smudge in your background image (bottom right) that's appearing in all areas that you used this background.
2. Standby screen - details are what sets apart good & great themes. But only if done. The "WED 4, 2009" is blocked by the time-date display. Also, I see a white line along the right side of the background image
3. Desktop highlight & active tab - same vertical white line running down the right side. But it looks fine in the other highlight bars
4. Menu bar - the vertical white dividers looks a bit out of place. Try grey
5. Valentine (the heart shape) - if you need to re-size it, keep it proportioned. Also, it's doesn't need to be centered all the time. For that matter, it doesn't have to be part of the background.
6. Font colours - they are readable but try to be consistent by using colour tones that complement the overall colour scheme (i.e. try light grey or shades of grey
7. Scroll bar - light blue does not complement the scheme because of the red heart (I feel)

Overall, your theme is titled "black.clock". You should try to apply elements of your clock (not the whole clock) on some of the other screens... would tie the whole theme together better

smile.gif






@cute heart - my friend, don't let some good words to fake you. Honestly, with this theme you got no chance in TMC. But the idea is very good, and rjd offered you a perfect landmarks list to make your theme a candidate to be on the podium.
What I can say is dont stretch the objects; meaning keep the objects on its proportioned size, and use more transparency. byebye.gif



Thank you for your lovely advice ,
BadBoyThemer
@ cute heart: your idea is solid and a good one, but you seem to be lacking follow through, the great thing about design is well ................ you design it how you want it, there are no restrictions in art but your own imagination. Your bars ( highlights ) should not be soo big, as long as the menu text can be seen on bars thats enough, me I go 2 pixels from bootom and top usually, especially if i going to really do detialed bars, and want to create an illusion of depth on a 2D object. I often utilize those extra spaces of pixels for adding drop shadows, or deeper shapes etc as i said anything goes smile.gif so here is a quick list of what i would personally do to your theme to spruce it up a bit.

1 - I would make the clock animation smaller maybe 30% smaller, this would allow for both your clock and the themes digital clock to be seen easily. also it would allow the operator text to be seen.

2 - on your highlights as stated earlier I would make highlights not so big, and I would also change the heart graphic from being stretched to being even sized maybe 20 by 20 px, and placed on the end of each highlight, this means text can be easily seen. Plus it will look a lot better than currently.

3 - think more about your themes color pallet, if your main colors are to be black and red, then choose similar colors for other details, like make the scroll bar red, and make your text white for screens, cause white can be easily read on a dark surface, and make the scroll bar background black, for a black background, with a nice red scroll bar will look great, and totally fit in with your themes appearance and style.

4 - When ever you wish to use a busy image on the navigation content, try this little trick.

make your image the first layer, then add a new layer next select all of the new layer by using ctrl A , and then fill it in with flat black #000000, next go to your new layers blending properties and change the overall layer opacity ( first option at top in menu ) to say 70 or 80% , this will allow you to still visabley see your image, while adding enough cover to now also see any text written over it smile.gif

All of what I have said may seem hard or confusing for you now, but given some time and practice, will become common sense in newer projects etc, it all comes with time ( don't believe me go see my older work lol )

so yea just rememebr it's your theme there are no set boudries in how you go about skinning, and it is this that sets each designer apart, sure being skilled at digital art helps, but it's not everything, imagination is smile.gif

best of luck grouphug.gif
mamaflump
Ok, here is my standby screen :-)
Hopefully you will see i have been playing around more and made an improvement :-)

boxieblue
very nice, mamaflump. i think it would be better to have ur statusbar 2 pixels bigger wink.gif

@BBT: oh wow! i had never though of adding a drop shadow in the remaining space! thanks
boxieblue
ok so here is another version, with subtle changes over the first one.....



so now it is either this one, the first one, or the second one with smaller highlights.....
sam1374
Hi, i am planning to use this wallpaper...any suggetions??????

Gault
@ Boxie

how many versions are you going to create for this theme ???

this one also looks nice. but i liked white one more.
Gault
QUOTE (sam1374 @ Feb 5 2009, 04:55 AM) *
Hi, i am planning to use this wallpaper...any suggetions??????




Great Wallpaper Sam
boxieblue
@sam: hmmm.....interesting pick....can't wait to see what font color, and highlight color, you use.......

@Gault: i plan to create as many as it takes to get it right...down to the smallest of details smile.gif that's wat i have learnt from themers like BBT, Jasnastos, and others. if you don't dedicate time to your theme(or wally), you can't expect to win...... smile.gif

i will wait to see what the others say, coz i have to choose from the white and all-blue versions for the final entry thread......


anywayz....i have REVIVED my theming thread wink.gif

here's a link:
BoxieBlue's Themes
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